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So some of you guys asked for a PDF version of the comic.

Please enjoy.

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reduxwriter Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2016
How do i download? Where's the download button?
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's on the right side of your screen, almost next to the picture.
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SickChase Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016
I'm not into big lips.
But I still found this... AWESOME.
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad you liked it.
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wrichter7934 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2016
Great story!Kudos!
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed my work :) (Smile) 
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catfish27 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016
Excellent bimbo transformation process and reality alteration!

I'm sure many of us who are native English speakers would be willing to give your next script a look.
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you.

Thats a really good idea.
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vipcaptions Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016
Oh, wow, hey... Like... I'm blushing here, thanks for the mention! It was my pleasure to help you out!
It was very very good. I like the way the story evovled, the inner fight against the way she was turning... and the office as an environment for changing is awesome, so public, so much reputation to damage.

You also did a good job with the morphs and positioning the camera. The clothing selection was excelent.

Congrats!!!!
I think all the possitive feedback you're getting talks for itself.
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! This means a lot to hear it from you.

I plan to do an epiloge, but I might need a blog to post it. Im afraid of being banned for xxx content. 
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CCrow Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016
Loved this! An excellent comic! I'd love to see more of the incidental reality/mental changes (is she still a graduate? what vocabulary changes has she had?) though I know it doesn't really translate well to this media. That said, really hot, really enjoyable and really well paced! Brilliant stuff!
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im glad you enjoyed it.

And thanks for the watch.
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doowoo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016
6 outta 5 stars
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.
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BimboMakeoverFan Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016
fantastic work for your first effort. I hope this is the start of a long and creative time in the bimbofication universe.
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you. I plan to do many other things too than just bimbofication. 
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golbezguy Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016
I really enjoyed it! It was briskly paced as well, so uploading most of the transformation as one set was a good idea. She looked particularly cute on page 101. There were some notable grammar mistakes which made some dialogue clunky to read, but nothing to the point where I was taken out of it. 
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.

And sorry for my bad grammar, but my first language is not english. But I try my best.
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golbezguy Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016
It is still coherent English, so don't stress out. 
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok.
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Grandiaplayer Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016
WOW THAT WAS GREAT! I'm not even sure what my favorite part was because I like the whole dang thing!
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :) (Smile) 
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Dynamoob Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just read through the whole thing and I have to say I quite liked it. As it started I was expecting a long and involved story arc, so I was a little disappointed that it didn't happen because there's a lot to be explored more deeply with the premise you created. That being said however, I really enjoyed that by keeping the story brief you chose to devote extra pages to the actual transformation sequence. It created a wonderful pacing that kept me guessing how far it would go. There were several points where the transformation looked to be over for now only surprise and keep going, which I really liked as a reader. The reality shift at the end caught me by surprise. As her transformation was coming to a close, I was really interested in seeing everyone's reactions to Gwendoline's new appearance and what sort of situation dynamics would arise from it. Reality shifts can sometimes create clunky storytelling when they occur suddenly; they work best, I've found, when a story eases gradually into it.

There were some technical and storytelling issues that I noticed as I read it, but they didn't detract from the overall experience. They're for the most part not glaring problems, instead more little things that you pick up on as you get experience in the medium. On the flip side though, there are a lot of good decisions made in the story-boarding and composing. For a first outing, this is very good and I see quite a bit of potential going forward.

Overall, well done.
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im really glad you say this. Especially since you are one of my favorite artist here in DA. Travel Buddies is still one of my favorite comics out there.
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skindral Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016
Thank you so much for that PDF it's so much easier to read than having to look at all those pages individually!
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem. Many people suggested it and it does not give me much extra work.
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skindral Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016
That's great :D So are you going to keep making PDF's for future stories as well?
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I suppose so. But I will keep the individual pictures as well. 
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skindral Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016
Sounds like a plan :)
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MrPhoenyXXX Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can I ask what software you used to create your PDF?
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Of course you can.
I downloaded from this site www.compulsivecode.com/project… You dont need to install it, just unpack and run it. Its very easy to use. 
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MrPhoenyXXX Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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SitriAbyss Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem. If you need anything just ask.
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MrPhoenyXXX Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Same to you. :)
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